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Thursday, April 28, 2011

The Traveller

Its a long way
not longer than life
I have stayed here
for some time that i cared

I had to flow further
long stayed water always flusters
going to nowhere my path shows
through the deepest lows of shadows

For my path was still undecided
neither I fled nor chided
I walked alone in the long deserts
got scared of forests and leopards

Sometimes In darkness I cried too loud
I was alone in between the crowd
I became strong yet so strange
stronger than life,
and stranger than disdain

Throughout the journey i was with me
above the mountains and beneath the seas
Never the money or a relation died
never again i cared, laughed or cried

The journey has been stark-black and white
I lived every virtue and committed every sin
I traveled to grow and grew some more
higher than skies and cleverer than lore...


  1. Very Nice composition, keep growing...explore and travel, and those mysteries unravel, and we'll await another song, another story from your journeys

  2. Nice,but you need to make a correction...desserts is a treat to mean deserts as in hot, dry places...

  3. Hey Rose,
    Yes you are right. That was a typo! My mistake. ThanQ for correcting the error :)

  4. I love this. Keep on writing some more beautiful poems.

  5. ThanQ Lonelytree for compliment and motivation.. :)


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